Journal E
A long time ago, very old palace stood near the river and ugly old woman lives in the palace alone. One day, when the old woman waked up, she noticed that she was different somewhere. She was surprised when she looked a mirror. She became younger and beautiful. Therefore, she decided to participate in the party. At the party, she was popular with men. She felt happy because she has never got a lot of attention from men. After short time, she looked the clock and she remembered the story of Cinderella. She thought, “It’s nearly 12 o’clock! According the story I have to get home!” Then she hurried back to home. Followed precedent, she forgot her shoe outside the hall. The next day, a man who met at the party visited her. The man was looking for the shoe owner. She insisted it’s hers, but he was never believed her. She tried to put on it to prove. She did, however, she couldn’t put it because she has returned to former! She had never been so popular with men before or since.
Journal F
It was difficult for me to write paragraph and journal, but sometimes it was fun. I couldn’t understand Main paragraph 7. I was confused what should I do, so I wanted to change the topic to easy one. That’s all. Thank you very much for one year.
