Draft Essay 2-02a: My favorite place

I will tell you about my favorite place. I have a lot of favorite places. The best place is my parents' house. My parents' house is in Kagoshima, so I can go back there only few times. The house has red roof and it is two-story building. It built about ten years ago. There are six room and veranda. My father and my mother are living at there now. But next to my parents’ house is my grandparent’ house so, I think there are not lonely. I will tell you about good points in my parents’ house.

First my favorite place in my parents’ house is my room. My room shared with my sister, so the room is large. There are two beds, desks and chest of drawers. And also have TV, TV game, CD player and table in my room. My room’s curtains are yellow green and yellow, so it is little dazzling in the morning.

Next good place is living room. There is TV, sofa, table, piano and PC in the living room. I like TV because it is big. And I like piano. I often play it when I go back to my parents’ house. If I start playing the piano, I play it about an hour. But the piano is not to tuning, so I wanted to tune a piano. When I go home, I always spend on the sofa. I like that sofa. It is my position. I can relax in the living room.

The last place, I like garden. The garage can put three cars. There are a lot of vegetable and plants in the garden. My grandparents’ are take care it. The garden’s size is not so small. And gravel around, so if thief came, we can notice its sound. I used to play volleyball there. And I often played there. At summer, we did BBQ and sparkler. In winter, I made snowman and did snowball fight with my father. 

There still have lots of favorite place in my parents’ house. For example, veranda, Japanese style room and so on. I am living myself and its room is so small. I want to move other room. And I want to make comfortable and relax room like my parents’ house. I’m looking forward to move new room. But I think the best place is my parents’ house. I think I can’t make good place than my parents’ house because I grew up there. I like my house, my family and the space with my family.

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